loraineA
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my poem.
What Once Was
I once was the child, so full of life and joy. I spent my days in the sun drenched in lace and little hairbows , like all little girls wish, yet my happiness was to have it's end, a night in which there was a child that shivered in the dark as the water consumed her small soul. Out of the darkness a light came and the child from the water ran the child and traded her hairbows for a halo and her lace for wings.
bye,Lolly,
--- ''I kiss you 10000000 times,but I can't count it myself!''-Tatiana Romanov.
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4/7/2007, 5:09 am
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MurdochsAid
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Re: my poem.
Hi Lolly!
First of all, I extend to you a very warm welcome to my board...and I will be looking forward to more of your visits in the very near future.
Secondly, and last but not least... thank you for your beautiful heart-stirring poem. Infact, I found it to be most moving to say the least. Great job!!!
Hugs,
MA
--- For I am not ashamed of the gospel of Christ: for it is the power of God unto salvation to everyone that believeth. ~ Romans 1:16
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4/12/2007, 6:14 am
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loraineA
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Re: my poem.
hi, thanks!
bye,lolly,
--- ''I kiss you 10000000 times,but I can't count it myself!''-Tatiana Romanov.
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4/15/2007, 7:11 am
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